I have a boat that turns into a submarine and it has a massive gun that shoots chickens that crash into other ships and make them sink by pecking really hard and fast. The other pirates are scared of me because I’ll shoot them. My crew is made out of basically chickens who fight and man the normal ship.
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Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 12 May 2020
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Hi pirate Kalem, what a great photo. Those chickens sound very talented sailing a boat and destroying the enemies boats. Have you watched the Pirates of The Caribbean?
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ReplyDeleteI love this blog post. I like that your story is really funny, especially the bit about how the gun shoots chickens which makes the other boats sink. You look very cool as a pirate, are you Captain Jack Sparrow?
Sarah